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| − | * ... that the '''[[Yellamma temple, Saundatti]]''' ''(pictured)'' with the deity of goddess Yellamma is associated with the ancient practice of [[Devadasi system]] which is now claimed by [[Government of Karnataka|Karnataka]] to have been eliminated? | + | *<s> ... that the '''[[Yellamma temple, Saundatti]]''' ''(pictured)'' with the deity of goddess Yellamma is associated with the ancient practice of [[Devadasi system]] which is now claimed by [[Government of Karnataka|Karnataka]] to have been eliminated?</s> |
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<small>Created by [[User:Nvvchar|Nvvchar]] ([[User talk:Nvvchar|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:51, 22 May 2016 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Nvvchar|Nvvchar]] ([[User talk:Nvvchar|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:51, 22 May 2016 (UTC).</small> | ||
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::*{{u|Yoninah}} I am suggesting the following ALT2 hook.'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 00:48, 8 June 2016 (UTC) | ::*{{u|Yoninah}} I am suggesting the following ALT2 hook.'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 00:48, 8 June 2016 (UTC) | ||
| − | '''ALT1''' hook | + | '''ALT1''' hook: <s>... that in the '''[[Yellamma temple, Saundatti]]''' ''(pictured)'' the ancient practice of dedication of girls to the temple under [[Devadasi system]] is now claimed to have been eliminated by [[Government of Karnataka|Karnataka]]</s> |
::*{{u|Yoninah}} I have done some copy editing and also slightly changed the text in the above hook.'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 10:18, 8 June 2016 (UTC) | ::*{{u|Yoninah}} I have done some copy editing and also slightly changed the text in the above hook.'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 10:18, 8 June 2016 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | :::*OK, all issues addressed. I am tightening and fixing the grammar in the ALT1 hook as follows: | |
| + | :::*'''ALT2''': ... that the [[Government of Karnataka]] claims to have eliminated the [[Devadasi|ancient practice]] of dedicating girls to the '''[[Yellamma Temple, Saundatti|Yellamma Temple]]''' ''(pictured)''? | ||
| + | :::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I've also edited the image caption and fixed the credit line with the page rename. Rest of review per CeeGee. ALT2 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:14, 10 June 2016 (UTC) | ||
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Yellamma temple, Saundatti
... that the Yellamma temple, Saundatti (pictured) with the deity of goddess Yellamma is associated with the ancient practice of Devadasi system which is now claimed by Karnataka to have been eliminated?
Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 04:51, 22 May 2016 (UTC).
Article is new and long enough with 4,247 chars at nomination time. It is neutral and cites sources inline. I AGF for external links I can not access. "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" reports low copyvio rates between 1.0 and 8.3%. Hook is well-formatted and interesting. Its length is just at limit with 200 chars. Its fact is cites inline. İmage is found in the article, is ©-free and appears good in small size. QPQ was done. I will approve after your action regarding following question.
- İs it possible that the temple is at (N 15 45' 15" E 75 9' 14") and not at (N 15 45' 46" E 75 6' 36) as given in the infobox? Please recheck and modify or comment. CeeGee 10:47, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
- Template:U Thanks for the review. As I could not access the exact coordinates of the temple I used the coordinates of the Saundatti town where the temple is located. I would rather go with the coordinates given by you. I have made corrections in the infobox. I hope it is ok now.Nvvchar. 12:59, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
Everything is fine now. Good to go. CeeGee 13:06, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
The hook is poorly written and hard to understand. Can it be sharpened? Yoninah (talk) 20:09, 7 June 2016 (UTC)- Template:U I am suggesting the following ALT2 hook.Nvvchar. 00:48, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
ALT1 hook: ... that in the Yellamma temple, Saundatti (pictured) the ancient practice of dedication of girls to the temple under Devadasi system is now claimed to have been eliminated by Karnataka
- Template:U I have done some copy editing and also slightly changed the text in the above hook.Nvvchar. 10:18, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
- OK, all issues addressed. I am tightening and fixing the grammar in the ALT1 hook as follows:
- ALT2: ... that the Government of Karnataka claims to have eliminated the ancient practice of dedicating girls to the Yellamma Temple (pictured)?
I've also edited the image caption and fixed the credit line with the page rename. Rest of review per CeeGee. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 11:14, 10 June 2016 (UTC)