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* ... that the '''[[Yellamma temple, Saundatti]]''' ''(pictured)'' with the deity of goddess Yellamma is associated with the ancient practice of [[Devadasi system]] which is now claimed by [[Government of Karnataka|Karnataka]] to have been eliminated?
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*<s> ... that the '''[[Yellamma temple, Saundatti]]''' ''(pictured)'' with the deity of goddess Yellamma is associated with the ancient practice of [[Devadasi system]] which is now claimed by [[Government of Karnataka|Karnataka]] to have been eliminated?</s>
  
 
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<small>Created by [[User:Nvvchar|Nvvchar]] ([[User talk:Nvvchar|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:51, 22 May 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Nvvchar|Nvvchar]] ([[User talk:Nvvchar|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:51, 22 May 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
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::*{{u|Yoninah}} I am suggesting the following ALT2 hook.'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 00:48, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
 
::*{{u|Yoninah}} I am suggesting the following ALT2 hook.'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 00:48, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
  
'''ALT1''' hook*... that in the '''[[Yellamma temple, Saundatti]]''' ''(pictured)'' the ancient practice of dedication of girls to the temple under [[Devadasi system]] is now claimed to have been eliminated by [[Government of Karnataka|Karnataka]]  
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'''ALT1''' hook: <s>... that in the '''[[Yellamma temple, Saundatti]]''' ''(pictured)'' the ancient practice of dedication of girls to the temple under [[Devadasi system]] is now claimed to have been eliminated by [[Government of Karnataka|Karnataka]]</s>
 
::*{{u|Yoninah}} I have done some copy editing and also slightly changed the text in the above hook.'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 10:18, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
 
::*{{u|Yoninah}} I have done some copy editing and also slightly changed the text in the above hook.'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 10:18, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
 
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:::*OK, all issues addressed. I am tightening and fixing the grammar in the ALT1 hook as follows:
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:::*'''ALT2''': ... that the [[Government of Karnataka]] claims to have eliminated the [[Devadasi|ancient practice]] of dedicating girls to the '''[[Yellamma Temple, Saundatti|Yellamma Temple]]''' ''(pictured)''?
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:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I've also edited the image caption and fixed the credit line with the page rename. Rest of review per CeeGee. ALT2 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:14, 10 June 2016 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 11:14, 10 June 2016

Yellamma temple, Saundatti

Yellamma Temple
Yellamma Temple

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 04:51, 22 May 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new and long enough with 4,247 chars at nomination time. It is neutral and cites sources inline. I AGF for external links I can not access. "Earwig's Copyvio Detector" reports low copyvio rates between 1.0 and 8.3%. Hook is well-formatted and interesting. Its length is just at limit with 200 chars. Its fact is cites inline. İmage is found in the article, is ©-free and appears good in small size. QPQ was done. I will approve after your action regarding following question.
  • İs it possible that the temple is at (N 15 45' 15" E 75 9' 14") and not at (N 15 45' 46" E 75 6' 36) as given in the infobox? Please recheck and modify or comment. CeeGee 10:47, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
  • Template:U Thanks for the review. As I could not access the exact coordinates of the temple I used the coordinates of the Saundatti town where the temple is located. I would rather go with the coordinates given by you. I have made corrections in the infobox. I hope it is ok now.Nvvchar. 12:59, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Everything is fine now. Good to go. CeeGee 13:06, 29 May 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg The hook is poorly written and hard to understand. Can it be sharpened? Yoninah (talk) 20:09, 7 June 2016 (UTC)
  • Template:U I am suggesting the following ALT2 hook.Nvvchar. 00:48, 8 June 2016 (UTC)

ALT1 hook: ... that in the Yellamma temple, Saundatti (pictured) the ancient practice of dedication of girls to the temple under Devadasi system is now claimed to have been eliminated by Karnataka

  • Template:U I have done some copy editing and also slightly changed the text in the above hook.Nvvchar. 10:18, 8 June 2016 (UTC)
  • OK, all issues addressed. I am tightening and fixing the grammar in the ALT1 hook as follows:
  • ALT2: ... that the Government of Karnataka claims to have eliminated the ancient practice of dedicating girls to the Yellamma Temple (pictured)?
  • Symbol confirmed.svg I've also edited the image caption and fixed the credit line with the page rename. Rest of review per CeeGee. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 11:14, 10 June 2016 (UTC)