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* ... that '''[[Ympyrätalo]]''' ''(pictured)'' in [[Helsinki]], [[Finland]] features booths that served as a [[Drive-through#Banking|drive-thru bank]] in the 1960s? | * ... that '''[[Ympyrätalo]]''' ''(pictured)'' in [[Helsinki]], [[Finland]] features booths that served as a [[Drive-through#Banking|drive-thru bank]] in the 1960s? | ||
| + | * [ALT1 by Calliopejen1] ... that [[Drive-through#Banking|drive-thru banking]] stands operated in the 1960s outside '''[[Ympyrätalo]]''' ''(pictured)'' in [[Helsinki]], [[Finland]]? | ||
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| − | :* | + | :* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutral, most sentences have inline citations, I could not review Finnish sources for close paraphrasing/translation issues but did check the English language sources. Generally good but reworded one sentence that was too close to the source. Hook is generally good but "booths" is a little confusing, and it's not clear that these booths were outside the building (I was trying to figure out how cars could get inside). Suggested ALT1 above. Image looks good -- appears to be from a legit flickr account with kite photography. [[User:Calliopejen1|Calliopejen1]] ([[User talk:Calliopejen1|talk]]) 18:28, 1 July 2014 (UTC) |
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Ympyrätalo
- ... that Ympyrätalo (pictured) in Helsinki, Finland features booths that served as a drive-thru bank in the 1960s?
- [ALT1 by Calliopejen1] ... that drive-thru banking stands operated in the 1960s outside Ympyrätalo (pictured) in Helsinki, Finland?
- Comment: References for the hook are unfortunately in Finnish as I couldn't find English sources. It is still an interesting fact that even most of the locals don't know.
Created by Jopo (talk). Self nominated at 17:04, 1 July 2014 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutral, most sentences have inline citations, I could not review Finnish sources for close paraphrasing/translation issues but did check the English language sources. Generally good but reworded one sentence that was too close to the source. Hook is generally good but "booths" is a little confusing, and it's not clear that these booths were outside the building (I was trying to figure out how cars could get inside). Suggested ALT1 above. Image looks good -- appears to be from a legit flickr account with kite photography. Calliopejen1 (talk) 18:28, 1 July 2014 (UTC)
