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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] QPQ done. Adequately referenced. Article is long enough and new enough and spot checks reveal no copyvios. [[User:Valenciano|Valenciano]] ([[User talk:Valenciano|talk]]) 14:48, 13 November 2016 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] QPQ done. Adequately referenced. Article is long enough and new enough and spot checks reveal no copyvios. [[User:Valenciano|Valenciano]] ([[User talk:Valenciano|talk]]) 14:48, 13 November 2016 (UTC)
 
::*Sorry, the hook is not very hooky for an international audience. What do you think about:
 
::*Sorry, the hook is not very hooky for an international audience. What do you think about:
::*'''ALT1''': ... that though Indian communist politician '''[[Z.A. Ahmed (Indian politician)|Z.A. Ahmed]]''' declined a request to move to [[Pakistan]], he was forced to move there to escape an arrest warrant? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:24, 13 November 2016 (UTC)
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::*'''ALT1''': <s>... that though Indian communist politician '''[[Z.A. Ahmed (Indian politician)|Z.A. Ahmed]]''' declined a request to move to [[Pakistan]], he was forced to move there to escape an arrest warrant? </s> [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:24, 13 November 2016 (UTC)
 
:::Hm, I'm not fully convinced with ALT1. First of all, there needs to be a clarification that it was his own party that requested, not the Pakistani authorities. Also, it is questionable whether the arrest warrant forced him to move there. --[[User:Soman|Soman]] ([[User talk:Soman|talk]]) 02:29, 14 November 2016 (UTC)
 
:::Hm, I'm not fully convinced with ALT1. First of all, there needs to be a clarification that it was his own party that requested, not the Pakistani authorities. Also, it is questionable whether the arrest warrant forced him to move there. --[[User:Soman|Soman]] ([[User talk:Soman|talk]]) 02:29, 14 November 2016 (UTC)
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::::*{{ping|Soman}} do you have another idea? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:09, 14 November 2016 (UTC)
 
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Z.A. Ahmed (Indian politician)

5x expanded by Soman (talk). Self-nominated at 21:34, 8 November 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg QPQ done. Adequately referenced. Article is long enough and new enough and spot checks reveal no copyvios. Valenciano (talk) 14:48, 13 November 2016 (UTC)
  • Sorry, the hook is not very hooky for an international audience. What do you think about:
  • ALT1: ... that though Indian communist politician Z.A. Ahmed declined a request to move to Pakistan, he was forced to move there to escape an arrest warrant? Yoninah (talk) 23:24, 13 November 2016 (UTC)
Hm, I'm not fully convinced with ALT1. First of all, there needs to be a clarification that it was his own party that requested, not the Pakistani authorities. Also, it is questionable whether the arrest warrant forced him to move there. --Soman (talk) 02:29, 14 November 2016 (UTC)