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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 06:20, 1 September 2019 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that after the US Congress passed a resolution urging the [[International Olympic Committee|IOC]] to reject Beijing's bid for the [[2000 Summer Olympics|2000 Olympics]], Beijing's Vice Mayor '''[[Zhang Baifa]]''' threatened to boycott the [[1996 Summer Olympics|1996 Atlanta Olympics]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.nytimes.com/1993/09/18/sports/olympics-chinese-boycott-threat-is-denied.html NYT: "Zhang Baifa, the Deputy Mayor of Beijing and the head of the committee seeking the 2000 Games, touched off the controversy when he told Australian television that China might boycott the 1996 Games as revenge for Congressional opposition to Beijing's bid for the 2000 Games."]</small>
 
* ... that after the US Congress passed a resolution urging the [[International Olympic Committee|IOC]] to reject Beijing's bid for the [[2000 Summer Olympics|2000 Olympics]], Beijing's Vice Mayor '''[[Zhang Baifa]]''' threatened to boycott the [[1996 Summer Olympics|1996 Atlanta Olympics]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.nytimes.com/1993/09/18/sports/olympics-chinese-boycott-threat-is-denied.html NYT: "Zhang Baifa, the Deputy Mayor of Beijing and the head of the committee seeking the 2000 Games, touched off the controversy when he told Australian television that China might boycott the 1996 Games as revenge for Congressional opposition to Beijing's bid for the 2000 Games."]</small>
 
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<small>Created by [[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]). Self-nominated at 17:50, 14 August 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]). Self-nominated at 17:50, 14 August 2019 (UTC).</small>
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:* {{Reviewing}} --[[User:Toreightyone|Toreightyone]] ([[User talk:Toreightyone|talk]]) 13:51, 15 August 2019 (UTC)
 
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: {{re|Toreightyone}} Thanks for your review. I'm fine with ALT1, but added "the US" before "Congress" for clarification. I omitted the word "summer" before "Olympics" in order to keep the hook below the length limit. Since ALT1 is short enough, I have no problem with adding it back. -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 18:19, 15 August 2019 (UTC)
 
: {{re|Toreightyone}} Thanks for your review. I'm fine with ALT1, but added "the US" before "Congress" for clarification. I omitted the word "summer" before "Olympics" in order to keep the hook below the length limit. Since ALT1 is short enough, I have no problem with adding it back. -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 18:19, 15 August 2019 (UTC)
:: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] That works for me; everything else looks to be in order {{emdash}} approving for ALT1. --[[User:Toreightyone|Toreightyone]] ([[User talk:Toreightyone|talk]]) 20:03, 15 August 2019 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 06:20, 1 September 2019

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:20, 1 September 2019 (UTC)

Zhang Baifa

Created by Zanhe (talk). Self-nominated at 17:50, 14 August 2019 (UTC).

Initial Review:

Article:
Newness: ☑Y
Length: ☑Y - 3214 B
Copyvio Check: ☑Y - violation unlikely
Neutrality: ☑Y
Grammar: ???? - I copyedited the article and renamed the last section to "Later life and death" because "Personal life" seems redundant with the first section. Could you check to make sure the paragraph about his wife and children still belongs in that section?☑Y
Sources: Template:Yellow tick - heavy reliance on sources one and two, not a big deal

Hook:
Length: ☑Y - but I noticed its straddling 200 characters
Content: ???? - "1996 Atlanta Olympics" and "2000 Olympics" seems awkward to me. Perhaps I can suggest an ALT1, let me know how you feel about it ☑Y

Neutrality: ☑Y
Source: ☑Y
QPQ: ☑Y

Overall: Symbol question.svg Good job on the article, there are a few questions I have in the Article/grammar and Hook/content section of my review. Toreightyone (talk) 14:58, 15 August 2019 (UTC)

Template:Re Thanks for your review. I'm fine with ALT1, but added "the US" before "Congress" for clarification. I omitted the word "summer" before "Olympics" in order to keep the hook below the length limit. Since ALT1 is short enough, I have no problem with adding it back. -Zanhe (talk) 18:19, 15 August 2019 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg That works for me; everything else looks to be in order — approving for ALT1. --Toreightyone (talk) 20:03, 15 August 2019 (UTC)