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* '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Šime Budinić]]''' created complex literary language based on [[Cyrillic]] and [[Glagolitic]] by addition of the [[Czech orthography|Czech]] [[diacritics]] to [[Latin script]] in order to penetrate as much [[South Slavs]] as possible?
 
* '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Šime Budinić]]''' created complex literary language based on [[Cyrillic]] and [[Glagolitic]] by addition of the [[Czech orthography|Czech]] [[diacritics]] to [[Latin script]] in order to penetrate as much [[South Slavs]] as possible?
 
{{U|EEng}}, What do you think about ALT1?--[[User:Antidiskriminator|Antidiskriminator]] ([[User talk:Antidiskriminator|talk]]) 07:15, 27 May 2015 (UTC)
 
{{U|EEng}}, What do you think about ALT1?--[[User:Antidiskriminator|Antidiskriminator]] ([[User talk:Antidiskriminator|talk]]) 07:15, 27 May 2015 (UTC)
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:Well, "penetrate as much South Slavs as possible" makes no sense, and the article says the same thing so I just don't know what to tell you to do. I think you need to find a native English speaker to copyedit the article for you, and then reconsider the hook. The nomination can go on hold while you get this done. [[User:EEng|EEng]] ([[User talk:EEng|talk]]) 22:32, 27 May 2015 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 22:32, 27 May 2015

Šime Budinić

Created by Antidiskriminator (talk). Self-nominated at 23:57, 24 May 2015 (UTC).

  • Struck ALT0 as somewhat unintelligible. I can kind of understand what it's trying to say but not really, so I can't fix it. EEng (talk) 05:23, 27 May 2015 (UTC)

Template:U, What do you think about ALT1?--Antidiskriminator (talk) 07:15, 27 May 2015 (UTC)

Well, "penetrate as much South Slavs as possible" makes no sense, and the article says the same thing so I just don't know what to tell you to do. I think you need to find a native English speaker to copyedit the article for you, and then reconsider the hook. The nomination can go on hold while you get this done. EEng (talk) 22:32, 27 May 2015 (UTC)