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:*'''ALT2''':... that '''[[Šime Budinić]]''' created complex literary language based on [[Cyrillic]] and [[Glagolitic]] by addition of the [[Czech orthography|Czech]] [[diacritics]] to [[Latin script]] in order to be used by as much [[South Slavs]] as possible?
 
:*'''ALT2''':... that '''[[Šime Budinić]]''' created complex literary language based on [[Cyrillic]] and [[Glagolitic]] by addition of the [[Czech orthography|Czech]] [[diacritics]] to [[Latin script]] in order to be used by as much [[South Slavs]] as possible?
 
:{{U|EEng}}, thanks for advice which I followed ([https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia%3AWikiProject_Guild_of_Copy_Editors%2FRequests&type=revision&diff=664381470&oldid=664362207 diff]) and requested copy editing at GOCE. What do you think about ALT2?--[[User:Antidiskriminator|Antidiskriminator]] ([[User talk:Antidiskriminator|talk]]) 06:18, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
 
:{{U|EEng}}, thanks for advice which I followed ([https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia%3AWikiProject_Guild_of_Copy_Editors%2FRequests&type=revision&diff=664381470&oldid=664362207 diff]) and requested copy editing at GOCE. What do you think about ALT2?--[[User:Antidiskriminator|Antidiskriminator]] ([[User talk:Antidiskriminator|talk]]) 06:18, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
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Why don't you ping me when the copyedit is done and we'll think about hooks then. [[User:EEng|EEng]] ([[User talk:EEng|talk]]) 12:08, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 12:08, 28 May 2015

Šime Budinić

Created by Antidiskriminator (talk). Self-nominated at 23:57, 24 May 2015 (UTC).

  • Struck ALT0 as somewhat unintelligible. I can kind of understand what it's trying to say but not really, so I can't fix it. EEng (talk) 05:23, 27 May 2015 (UTC)

Template:U, What do you think about ALT1?--Antidiskriminator (talk) 07:15, 27 May 2015 (UTC)

Well, "penetrate as much South Slavs as possible" makes no sense, and the article says the same thing so I just don't know what to tell you to do. I think you need to find a native English speaker to copyedit the article for you, and then reconsider the hook. The nomination can go on hold while you get this done. EEng (talk) 22:32, 27 May 2015 (UTC)
Template:U, thanks for advice which I followed (diff) and requested copy editing at GOCE. What do you think about ALT2?--Antidiskriminator (talk) 06:18, 28 May 2015 (UTC)

Why don't you ping me when the copyedit is done and we'll think about hooks then. EEng (talk) 12:08, 28 May 2015 (UTC)