Template:Did you know nominations/Abdul Sattar Ranjoor

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Abdul Sattar Ranjoor‎

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 19:19, 1 May 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Hello. On the hook, consider whether this format would be more interesting:
... that Kashmiri politician Abdul Sattar Ranjoor‎ was also a famous poet and was assassinated by militants at age 73?
  • On the review criteria:
- New - Yes, the article was created on May 1
- Long enough – Yes, the prose portion is 1,576 characters
- is neutral - Yes, although it would be better to specify a specific group rather than "militants"
- cites sources with inline citations - Yes
- is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism - yes for the sources I could access
- Hook - is 112 characters (suggested alternate is 128 characters)
- Hook facts - they all are cited
- QPQ – ??? (sorry, I have not figured out how to tell this yet)
  • Fact checking the article:
  • NB sources 1, 3, 4, 6 and 11 are not available online so I have not been able to check against them and source 8 is viewable but would not show for me (source 8 is important because it alleges fraud on the part of his opponent's party)
  • source 2 says party's founding secretary, not state secretary
  • source 5 says he was a noted poet but doesn't specify he wrote in Urdu
  • there is a date discrepancy to fix - source 5 says he was killed on April 8, 1990 but the article says (unsourced) that is was March 23
  • also source 5 spells his home village as Keegam Shopian while the article has Kegem Shopian. We don't have an article for the place either way so why not match the source?
  • the article says he was shot and killed instantly but the source given for it (source 5) does not mention either fact
  • sources 9 and 10 do not confirm the statements in the article (his third-place finishes in elections and number of votes) because they only give data for the first and second place candidates
  • should there be redirects for the alternate spellings seen in some sources, such as Abdul Sattar Ranjur?
184.147.147.28 (talk) 22:04, 2 May 2014 (UTC)