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Revision as of 17:46, 28 February 2014 by imported>Aboutmovies (need better hook)
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Carli Lloyd
- ... that two-time Olympic gold medalist Carli Lloyd plays for the Western New York Flash in the National Women's Soccer League?
- Reviewed: Zimbabwe women's national field hockey team at the 1980 Summer Olympics
Improved to Good Article status by Hmlarson (talk). Self nominated at 20:23, 23 February 2014 (UTC).
Recent GA, so I'll skip on quality, but the hook is simply more of a pedestrian statement of fact. It's suggest something incorporating that she was the first Rutgers athlete to be all-conference 4 times, or that she was coached by the Red Baron, or the 2008 player of the year. As in, keep that she is a 2-time medalist, but then instead of the "plays for" do another interesting hook. My personal favorite would be "that two-time Olympic gold medalist Carli Lloyd was coached by the Red Baron in high school?" You could even add her photo from the infobox where she is wearing red. For any of these hooks, an inline cite would be needed at the end of the sentence in the article, instead of just at the end of the para. Aboutmovies (talk) 17:46, 28 February 2014 (UTC)