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Erfurter Bahn

Itino train in Erfurt
Itino train in Erfurt
  • ... that the regional railway Erfurter Bahn, serving the capital of Thuringia (train in Erfurt pictured), announced the opening of several new lines on its centenary?

5x expanded by Alakzi (talk) and Gerda Arendt (talk). Nominated by Gerda Arendt (talk) at 19:12, 17 September 2015 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Template:Ping Mostly good; it's new enough, long enough and reliably sourced and within policy. QPQ has been done. I've made some minor changes to fix grammatical issues and added "the opening of several" to the hook to provide some necessary clarity. However, I don't see the hook fact stated explicitly in the article. It mentions the Erfurter Bahn starting to operate new lines but doesn't actually state that the new lines were announced at any point. Could this please be fixed? Prioryman (talk) 21:40, 26 September 2015 (UTC)