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Revision as of 15:14, 21 July 2016 by imported>KCVelaga (Comment)
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No. 75 Wing RAAF
- ... that an officer brought in to investigate Vultee Vengeance accidents at No. 75 Wing RAAF himself crash-landed in a Vengeance when he left?
- Reviewed: TBA
Improved to Good Article status by Ian Rose (talk). Self-nominated at 11:37, 19 July 2016 (UTC).
Long enough, hook is interesting and sourced. No close paraphrasing or neutrality detected. Passed GAN a week ago. QPQ done. I think the word 'appointed' is preferable that the word 'brought' and reconsidering the arrangement of words and other wording which makes the hook; ... that an officer appointed to investigate Vultee Vengeance accidents at No. 75 Wing RAAF, got crash-landed himself while in a Vengeance when he left?. Besides that everything seems fine. Regards, KCVelaga ☚╣✉╠☛ 15:14, 21 July 2016 (UTC)