Template:Did you know nominations/Peter McAdams

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Peter McAdams

  • ... that Peter McAdams received the Medal of Honor for carrying his wounded comrade 250 yards (230 m) while under fire?
    • ALT1:... that Peter McAdams immediately requested permission to enter enemy lines to rescue his wounded comrade?

Created by FiendYT (talk). Self-nominated at 18:00, 17 December 2018 (UTC).

  • Hi FiendYT, review follows: article created 17 December; article exceeds minimum length; article is written well and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I have added a lead to the article; I could not access the two main sources but am happy to AGF that there is no overly close paraphrasing from them; the first hook is mentioned in the article and referenced (I altered it slightly as the article made no mention of "heavy" fire) - AGF on sources; I have struck the second hook as the article makes no mention of "immediately" and without it there is no sense of the exceptional nature of the rescue; my preference is for the first hook anyway, context could be added by linking to Battle of Salem Church; QPQ has been carried out - Dumelow (talk) 10:25, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
Symbol voting keep.svg Thanks FiendYT, both ALT2 and ALT0 are approved - Dumelow (talk) 18:09, 19 December 2018 (UTC)