Template:Did you know nominations/Tyler Toland

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Tyler Toland

  • ... that Tyler Toland became the Republic of Ireland's youngest women's senior international football player in September 2017? Source: Donegal Daily

Created by The C of E (talk). Self-nominated at 08:05, 2 November 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is long enough, new enough, neutral, and there are no copyright violations (3.8% match). Issues/comments below:
(1): The fact/hook was true in September 2017, but I'm worried that it might be outdated. You never know... Would you be OK if we tweak the hook a bit to reflect that she became the youngest women's senior international football player in September (or "this year")?
(2): DOB is unsourced. The lead says she is "from" St Johnston, but ref 1 does not back this up.
(3): How do you feel about linking Republic of Ireland in the hook?
MX () 04:05, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
Template:Ping I'm OK with changing the hook wording. The DOB is sourced from the UEFA source and I have added another source for birthplace. I think that linking ROI would be WP:OVERKILL as it isn't really needed as people will know what ROI is. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 16:12, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
Template:Ping Got it. Let me know when you change it (that way I can approve the hook). MX () 16:49, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
Template:Ping Done. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 16:52, 8 November 2017 (UTC)