Template:Did you know nominations/White Wonderland

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White Wonderland

Created by ViperSnake151 (talk). Self nominated at 01:53, 26 July 2013 (UTC).

  • I have not reviewed the article, but I have concerns about the effectiveness of the proposed hook. It's too vague, and it focuses too much on the non-target article. I suggest the following revision: