Template:Did you know nominations/1951 Hawaii cyclone
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1951 Hawaii cyclone
- Comment: Going to review another DYK, even though I don't have to QPQ. (Start training :P)
Moved to mainspace by CycloneIsaac (talk). Self nominated at 21:36, 11 June 2014 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I'm wondering, though, where you got all that information in the first paragraph under Meteorological history – are you interpreting the statistical charts in footnotes 2 and 3? Per DYK rules, you need to add a cite after the sentences describing the second and third landfalls. Also, I suggest adding "in 1951" to the hook to place it in context. No QPQ needed for under-5 DYKs nominator. Yoninah (talk) 20:31, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- I added a few more cites to footnotes 2 and 3 for the other two landfalls. I am proposing an alt hook, with your suggestion.
- ALT 1:...that in 1951, a cyclone made landfall in Hawaii three times?
- —CycloneIsaac (Talk) 20:56, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you. What about my question about the statistical data? Yoninah (talk) 21:34, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
- IBTRACS and best track are statistical data, and I was interpreting it.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 23:08, 29 June 2014 (UTC)