Template:Did you know nominations/2013 Tiananmen Square car attack

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2013 Tiananmen Square car attack

Created by Gareth E Kegg (talk). Nominated by Gfosankar (talk) at 11:46, 31 October 2013 (UTC).

  • The article is new and long enough. QPQ done. "have uyghur names and come from areas in xinjiang where there has been significant violence one" this is close paraphrasing with the source.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 21:26, 2 November 2013 (UTC)
Close paraphrasing content removed. --Gfosankar (talk) 05:20, 3 November 2013 (UTC)
Thanks. The hook is not too long. Its cited with inline citation in the article. The hook should be amended with one "is", precisely "is described" if I am not wrong?--Antidiskriminator (talk) 20:32, 3 November 2013 (UTC)
I am sorry, I don't know which one is apt here. So I go with "is described". --Gfosankar (talk) 13:11, 4 November 2013 (UTC)
Sorry, I forgot to continue this review. I will continue it now.--Antidiskriminator (talk) 09:22, 6 November 2013 (UTC)