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Abbie Hutty

Abbie Hutty at Science Foo Camp
- ... that ExoMars engineer, Abbie Hutty (pictured), is the youngest ever Fellow of the IMechE?
- Reviewed: Knave-Go-By
- Comment: The article has been nominated for deletion so we should await the outcome of that discussion.
Created by Jesswade88 (talk). Nominated by Andrew Davidson (talk) at 18:55, 11 October 2017 (UTC).
Article is new enough and long enough. It is neutral and there are no apparent copyright problems. It draws on a wide range of sources, the large majority of which are appropriate. A DYK review has been completed. This is an interesting article and would be a good addition to DYK. However, there are some issues. Firstly, the article is currently being considered for deletion. It looks likely to be kept, but should not appear on the front page until the discussion is closed. The other issues need addressing:
- There are some statements in the article which are not sourced. It may be that some of the existing sources cover them, but (especially as this is a biography of a living person), they need to be explicitly sourced.
- One sentence is sourced to LinkedIn; although perhaps sufficient for her current job title, it would be great if there is a better source available.
- The September 2016 edition of The Engineer is referenced, but this needs more detail - which article on which page supports the statement?
- The page to which the unoosa reference links does not mention Hutty; perhaps a subpage does?
- The hook is not fully supported by the source, which states that she was (at the time) the youngest Fellow of the Institute of Mechanical Engineers, but not whether she was the youngest ever fellow.
- The picture is appropriately licensed but is not clear at small size. It could potentially be drastically cropped, but it's probably best not to use it on the front page.
- Because of the various sourcing issues, I've not fully reviewed every source used, but will do so if and when the initial issues are addressed. Warofdreams talk 22:50, 16 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping I've fixed the sourcing issues. The Engineer reference is an online "Q&A with spacecraft engineer Abbie Hutty" which says "I am the structures engineer on the ExoMars mission", but doesn't verify all the information preceding it, so I've dropped another source in. I don't think the picture is suitable main page material; if wishes were horses and beggars rode the Grand National, I'd use http://www.womanthology.co.uk/wp-content/uploads/2015/04/Abbie-Hutty-300-x-400.jpg but that's non-free.
- If you want a more straightforward hook, I'd go for ALT1 That Abbie Hutty hopes there really is Life on Mars? (It'll make David Bowie fans take notice). Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 15:46, 17 October 2017 (UTC)