Template:Did you know nominations/Action of 30 June 1798

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Action of 30 June 1798

Created by Jackyd101 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:04, 27 May 2015 (UTC).

  • Symbol voting keep.svg Article new and long enough, well-written & referenced. Hook under 200 characters and interesting enough. Hook fact sourced to (offline) book source. Sasata (talk) 04:20, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
I don't see what "but only two ever sailed again" adds to the hook, IMO the hook would be better without it because the fact that all three ships grounded is the unusual fact and the extra phrase just distracts attention from it. In fact I'll add an alt: