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Adrift (video game)

  • ... that the original prototype for the upcoming video game Adrift was developed by three people in ten weeks?

Created by Rhain1999 (talk). Self nominated at 08:05, 15 December 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The hook - while compelling - seems to be sourced to a self-published source, namely, the video game publisher's own website. Could the hook be changed to "that developers claimed the original ..."? Other than that it's new enough, long enough, well-sourced, and seems to meet all other criteria. DocumentError (talk) 01:41, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping I have actually read some external sources that back up the statement in the hook, but I'm fine with changing the hook as you suggested. -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 04:03, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
  • Also, would it be possible to change the hook so that the title of the game reads "ADR1FT"? This is the official title for the game, and I actually believe that the article itself should be renamed if it does not conflict with any policies. -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 01:49, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
Template:Ping, courtesy ping. Re: ADR1FT, the precedent of Se7en and Driv3r is to not spell it that way (with the sole exception of mentioning it once as a stylization in the lede). czar  04:38, 2 January 2015 (UTC)
I thought this was the case. Thanks for the information, Template:U! -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 08:34, 2 January 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Original reviewer has not responded to this. New review requested. Fuebaey (talk) 22:07, 10 January 2015 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg New (Dec 15th), long enough, neutral, a few close paraphrasing concerns here, QPQ done. First hook needs an immediate ref in article (see 3b). Rephrased second hook to be a bit more neutral. Really, really nice work with this. Please ping me if I don't respond. czar  23:45, 10 January 2015 (UTC)