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Revision as of 21:11, 13 June 2020 by imported>BennyOnTheLoose ({{subst:DYKtick}})
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Ashley Freiberg
... that racing driver Ashley Freiberg is the first woman to win a race outright at Daytona International Speedway?Source: Ashley Freiberg opens with win: ESPNW- ALT1:
... that racing driver Ashley Freiberg is the first woman to win a race outright in the Continental Tire SportsCar Challenge?Source: Ashley Freiberg opens with win: ESPNW
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Improved to Good Article status by MWright96 (talk). Self-nominated at 10:51, 18 May 2020 (UTC).
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Returned from prep per discussion at WP:DYK#Prep 1: Race winner. Can you try something without a "first woman" angle please? Yoninah (talk) 21:47, 11 June 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Reply I do not believe I can create an appropriate alternative hook for this subject for reasons that it would not interest the general reader. MWright96 (talk) 10:49, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that motorsport champion Ashley Freiberg does cyclo-cross, hiking, rock climbing, and skate skiing in the mountains of Vermont to prepare for auto racing events? Yoninah (talk) 19:25, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Reply I think the new hook is an improvement over the original two. MWright96 (talk) 20:37, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
Thanks. Pinging Template:Ping to review ALT2. Yoninah (talk) 20:48, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Ping I'm happy with ALT2. (I've checked that it's verified by inline citation.) Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 20:57, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Ping Thank you. We need another tick please. Yoninah (talk) 20:59, 13 June 2020 (UTC)
As per above. (Template:Ping If this isn't what you meant, let me know. Thanks.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:11, 13 June 2020 (UTC)