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Aya Kanai
- ... that prior to serving as Executive Fashion Director for the magazines Cosmopolitan and Seventeen and one of the judges for Project Runway: Junior, Aya Kanai considered careers in puppetry or fine art?Source: "Raised by a graphic designer and fashion industry veteran in New York City, she juggled interests in fashion and performance art by studying art and global culture (and curating her wardrobe with thrift-store finds). She thought she'd be a fine artist, maybe a puppeteer." [1] / "Aya Kanai: Judge - Aya Kanai is the Executive Fashion Director at Cosmopolitan and Seventeen magazines." [2]
- ALT1:... that before she became the Executive Fashion Director for the magazines Cosmopolitan and Seventeen and one of the judges for Project Runway: Junior, Aya Kanai worked at a vegan restaurant in the East Village, Manhattan neighborhood of New York City?Source: same as above; text: "I came back from the fellowship and worked at the takeout counter of a vegan restaurant in the East Village of Manhattan."
- Comment: QPQ: Template:Did you know nominations/Trump Street
Created by Ceranthor (talk). Self-nominated at 16:59, 9 January 2018 (UTC).
- Reviewing--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 10:48, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
- Article created by Ceranthor on January 9, 2018 (new enough)-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 11:15, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
- 3459 characters of readable prose size (long enough)-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 11:15, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
- hook short enough, neutral and intersting enough.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 11:15, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
Technically the hook fact is cited by a WP:IC from a WP:RS at the end of the paragraph. However, as a reader, I am a bit uncomfortable with the great amount of prose between the facts of the hook and the citation. There are 5 long sentences after between the sentence on puppetry and the next presentation of a citation.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 11:23, 12 January 2018 (UTC)- The article is neutral.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 11:26, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Ping I cited the hook. ceranthor 15:14, 12 January 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Ping Could you revisit the hook? ceranthor 15:29, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
- QPQ satisfied.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 16:17, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
The copyvio detector link is having problems (41.5%) with source number 2.-TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 16:51, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Ping According to the tool ([3]), I think a great deal of this confidence comes from quotes or lists. I've made an attempt to copyedit and tweak the text a bit, but I don't think there's a copyvio issue here. ceranthor 15:31, 18 January 2018 (UTC)
--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 13:20, 19 January 2018 (UTC)