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Revision as of 18:54, 31 December 2012 by imported>Caknuck ({{unsigned}})
Battle of Żownin
- ... that during the long battle of Żownin, Cossacks managed to construct a bridge and move their entire camp?
- Reviewed: Henri Simon
Created/expanded by Piotrus (talk). Self nom at 19:53, 23 December 2012 (UTC)
-- There are a few issues with the article itself. Mostly, it needs a good copy edit for grammar. On the plus side, the length is more than sufficient for a new article. The sources are Polish, but those can be accepted per WP:AGF. As for the hook, it should state what is important about the bridge the Cossacks built.
- What about...
- ... that during the Battle of Żownin, Cossack forces constructed a bridge under the cover of darkness to relocate their camp and evade capture?
- Would be fine, but for the "evade capture" part, considering it was a battle the situation was more complex. I'd suggest dropping that part. And yes, feel free to help c/e the article, I am not a native English speaker, so such help is always welcome. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 11:51, 24 December 2012 (UTC)
- ALT... that during the Battle of Żownin, Cossack forces constructed a bridge under the cover of darkness to relocate their camp?Template:Unsigned
- ALT is good for me. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:52, 31 December 2012 (UTC)