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Revision as of 15:41, 30 July 2014 by imported>Cbl62 (Review)
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Bemis, Tennessee
- ... that after building Bemis, Tennessee, as a company town for its cotton mill workers, the Bemis Company offered transportation services for employees who didn't live there?
- ALT1:... that the designer of the company town of Bemis, Tennessee tried to make the community look like it had grown up over time?
- Reviewed: Purabá de Santa Bárbara
Created by Orlady (talk). Self nominated at 03:32, 30 July 2014 (UTC).
Article is new enough (created July 27), long enough, uses in-line citations and appears neutral. The original hook is cited to this source, but, unless I missed it, the source doesn't say that the company provided the referenced train and jitney service, just that such service existed. In any event, I think the alt 1 hook is superior, and it is supported by the same source. My only quibble is with the term "grown up" as applied to the growth of a city. It strikes me as overly colloquial; wouldn't "grown" without "up" be preferable? If you agree, I suggest striking "up" from alt 1. QPQ has been satisfied. And spot-checking finds no problems with unduly close paraphrasing, copyright violation or plagiarism. Cbl62 (talk) 15:41, 30 July 2014 (UTC)