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Captain (2019 film)
... that Nepalese Prime Minister Khadga Prasad Oli went to see the sport drama film Captain?Source: Myrepublica Jayhosh (in Nepali) lensnepalALT1:... that Prime Minister of Nepal Khadga Prasad Oli went to screening of Captain?ALT2:... that Prime Minister of Nepal Khadga Prasad Oli labeled Captain as Patriotism?Source: [1]
Created by CAPTAIN MEDUSA (talk). Self-nominated at 19:18, 21 March 2019 (UTC).
- Reviewed:Joravarsinh Jadav
The hook is not interesting. The cast section is unsourced. There is one unsourced sentence in box office sub-section. RRD (talk) 13:57, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Ping I've added more alts and added refs to cast section and removed unsourced sentence in box office sub-section. ___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 13:14, 24 March 2019 (UTC)
- I'd also like to mention that the article needs to be copyedited before it makes the main page, and have made a request over at WP:GOCE/R. I know that crore is linked in the article, but I'd also suggest that a conversion to USD be added to the article, if only for clarity (remember that not all readers are familiar with lakhs and crores). As the hook fact for ALTs 0 to 2 is no longer in the article, I've struck all of the above; Template:Ping please suggest new hooks if possible, thanks. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:07, 26 March 2019 (UTC)
- ALT1:
...that Prime Minister of Nepal regarded 2019 sports drama film Captain as Patriotism?Source: [2]
- ALT1:
ALT1 still isn't a very good hook. And in any case, this can't continue until the copyediting is done, because right now there are several grammatical issues. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 04:11, 4 April 2019 (UTC)
- ALT2:
... Mixed reviewed Captain was defined Patriotism by Prime Minister of NepalSource: [3]
- Template:Reply The article has been copy-edited. ___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 11:24, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- The article looks better now but the hooks proposed here are still grammatically incorrect. Do you need assistance in fixing them? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:03, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Reply yes please. ___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 12:54, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- ALT1a ... that Nepalese Prime Minister Khadga Prasad Oli praised the 2019 sports drama Captain for "delivering patriotism"?
- Honestly I don't find the hook or the hook fact spectacular, but I'll let another reviewer take a look at this. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 13:04, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
- The article looks better now but the hooks proposed here are still grammatically incorrect. Do you need assistance in fixing them? Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:03, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
This is probably worth giving a second look. Requesting a new reviewer. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:39, 14 April 2019 (UTC)
ALT1a is a cute hook. It reminds me of President Donald Trump commenting on everything on his Twitter account. The hook ref is verified and cited inline. But I have added one tag to the cast list, where the name of the character is not provided. Yoninah (talk) 14:02, 17 May 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Re I could not find the cast member's character, on film reviews or film websites.___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 11:41, 18 May 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Re I added the lead actress character. I found it after looking around for while. ___CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 12:25, 19 May 2019 (UTC)