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Carla Lalli Music
- ... that Carla Lalli Music was the first general manager at Shake Shack? Source: Bon Appetit
- ALT0a: that Carla Lalli Music, the food director of Bon Appétit, was the first general manager at Shake Shack? Source: Bon Appetit
- Reviewed: WNPE (FM)
Created by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 04:25, 19 October 2019 (UTC).
Article is new enough, long enough, adequately sourced, free of close paraphrasing, and has its hook cited inline and verified. While Shake Shack is a fairly well-known restaurant, I'm not sure if it's that famous outside the U.S., so it might be a good idea to either add something else to the hook (i.e. that Carla Lalli Music, who..., was the first general manager at Shake Shack?) or something to that effect. Alternatively, a hook could also be proposed based on her cooking show (Natalie Portman being a guest might raise attention). Also awaiting a QPQ to be accomplished. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:30, 19 October 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Reply to QPQ has been completed, and I've added an alternate hook that provides context for who Music is. Morgan695 (talk) 14:35, 19 October 2019 (UTC)