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Revision as of 16:21, 30 April 2013 by imported>Amberrock (Reviewing DYK with "?no")
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Di Genius
- Reviewed: NA
Created by Strachkvas (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 14:09, 15 April 2013 (UTC).
I believe you need a new ALT hook...the current hook is grammatically incorrect and needs to be revised in order for us to continue with the review process. At this stage, it simply doesn't make sense. Proudbolsahye (talk) 07:14, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
- ALT2:... that riddim composer Di Genius had his first hits in Jamaica in 2004, when he was 14 years old?
ALT1 seems to be boring, but ALT2 looks fine. However, there are some other issues here. The hook is not in the article. It does say Di Genius was in high school, but doesn't state his age at the time. Ref 9 indeed backs up some artists Di Genius worked with, but not all of them. Same thing for the line about who he's collobarated with; not all artists are in the sources. Furthermore, I would like to see his birth date and place properly referenced. —♦♦ AMBER(ЯʘCK) 16:21, 30 April 2013 (UTC)