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Djawoto
- ... that in 1966 the Indonesian ambassador Djawoto (pictured) sought political asylum in China?
- ALT1 suggestion: ... that in 1966 Indonesian ambassador Djawoto (pictured) sought political asylum in China, following the mass killings of 1965-66?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Mourneview Park
Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 19:23, 13 May 2014 (UTC).
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Sufficient prose length; hook under 200 characters; appears neutral; reliable seeming sources and hook cited (and specifically checked for verifiability); spot check found no infringement; created within the past five days. In short, ready to go!--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 04:46, 16 May 2014 (UTC)
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Neither the article nor the source make any mention of Djawoto seeking political asylum, simply that he was granted it. Also, I've read the article's final sentence, Template:Tq, more than once without understanding what it's getting at: the first clause makes no sense in context, and both clauses have grammatical problems. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:52, 18 May 2014 (UTC)
- As an individual cannot be a cadre, the last sentence still makes no sense. I've removed the first clause. However, what remains needs context: did he ask to return? When was he refused permission and by whom (or was it the government as a whole)? BlueMoonset (talk) 14:34, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
- Yes, an individual can be a communist cadre, see [1]. And this is backed up by the reference. The reference does not go into detail whether he solicited to be allowed to return or not, but does state that he did not get permission to come back. Do recall that his Indonesian citizenship was withdrawn. --Soman (talk) 17:47, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
