Template:Did you know nominations/Eduard Pernkopf

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Eduard Pernkopf

  • Reviewed: Invercargill by-election, 1930
  • Comment: I'm thinking this could run on November 24, the subject's 125th birthday. I ask any reviewer to put it down at the bottom of the page in the special occasion holding area and create a subsection for November 24.

5x expanded by Daniel Case (talk), CFCF (talk). Nominated by Daniel Case (talk) at 19:45, 15 November 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Fine and interesting article. Unfortuntaly, we didn't reach to review in time to the 125 year jubilee, as can be seen. The article is nominated within five days after a five-fold expansion. A variety of good inline-cited sources are used. Spotchecks didn't reveal significant close paraphrasing issues. The hook is interesting, but the latter part (given space by a Jewish physician) is not inline-cited as I can see. The whole paragraph starting "His former facilities" in the "Later years" lacks inline citation. As a sidenote, I am sure "later years" is a good headline, as he worked with the atlas also in these years; "later years" to me indicate the years after the main career has ended. In the 2Controversial legacy and debate over continued use" section one paragraph starts "It has been suggested". Here it should be precised who the suggestion was made by. As for the claim " its usage cannot be excluded from at least 800 images of the atlas", this seems like it might be referenced to ref 10, but I would like to see an inline citation with excact page number. The controversy section appears accurate and neutral, due to time I cannot check and consider everything in it. Regards, Iselilja (talk) 15:08, 25 November 2013 (UTC)