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Epidemiology in Country Practice
... that in Epidemiology in Country Practice, William Pickles described tracing 13 cases of jaundice to a country maid, including a man who often went "in the back door in the evenings, and helped her wash up"?
- Reviewed: Jessie Hickman
- Changed helps to helped for the sake of the hook.
Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 18:15, 5 May 2018 (UTC).
* ALT1... that William Pickles's research for Epidemiology in Country Practice traced 13 cases of jaundice to a country maid and a man who went "in the back door in the evenings, and helped her wash up"?
- Thanks Template:Ping Sorry to trouble you again, but on reflection I think those hooks are just too hard to understand. How about:
- ALT2... that William Pickles's research for Epidemiology in Country Practice traced 13 cases of jaundice to a country girl who was determined to attend a fête while infected with the disease?
- ALT3... that following his research for Epidemiology in Country Practice, William Pickles observed that "studies in epidemiology sometimes reveal romances"? Philafrenzy (talk) 08:55, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
Okay – both of those work. Hameltion (talk, contribs) 12:03, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks both. ALT3 is better and most accurate. Whispyhistory (talk) 12:21, 23 May 2018 (UTC)