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First Families of Pakistan
- ... that Jinnah family is the founder family of Pakistan whose member Muhammad Ali Jinnah was the first Governor-General of Pakistan?
- Reviewed: Cubana de Aviación Flight 9646
- Comment: New article
Created/expanded by Sahara4u (talk). Self nom at 04:45, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
- Comment In First Families of Pakistan#Jinnah_family, the first sentence is "Jinnah family is a political family in South Asia and is the founder family of Pakistan", referenced to a Balochistan Times article. However, that article does not use the phrase "founder family".
I searched for other uses of the term "founder family", but seem to be getting hits for "founder's family" rather than "founder family". The latter phrase implies that it was Jinnah's family who founded the country, and I don't think that terminology should be used unless reliably sourced.
Apart from that, the hook takes the form of "... that X is Y?", which is discouraged at Wikipedia:Did_you_know/Reviewing_guide#Review_the_hook.
(I have done none of the other DYK checks, so this is not a full review). --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 06:22, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
- ALT1... that Jinnah family is the family of the founder of Pakistan, Muhammad Ali Jinnah (pictured centre) who was the first Governor-General of Pakistan?
Needs full review. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:31, 29 September 2012 (UTC)