Template:Did you know nominations/First Flight (Star Trek: Enterprise)

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The result was: promoted by  — Crisco 1492 (talk) 15:39, 15 March 2013 (UTC).

First Flight (Star Trek: Enterprise)

The cast and crew of Star Trek: Enterprise are presented with a flag from the U.S. Navy aircraft carrier Enterprise.

  • Comment: A rather unusual image as I think its the only free use image of any Star Trek cast members actually in uniform.

Created/expanded by Miyagawa (talk). Self nominated at 13:45, 9 March 2013 (UTC).

  • I will review this shortly. Chris857 (talk) 04:34, 10 March 2013 (UTC)
  • Actually, review will happen tomorrow, but I have begun a copyedit. Chris857 (talk) 04:54, 10 March 2013 (UTC)
  • Article expanded almost 9x to about 10,000 characters within last few days
  • QPQ satisfied
  • Cited inline
  • Neutral
  • Both images are PD-USGov
  • Sources appear sufficiently reliable for a TV show
  • I see no copyvio
Issues/Suggestions:
  • You might want to look through the paragraph of reception dealing with the ratings, as the grammar doesn't flow well for me
Chris857 (talk) 21:03, 10 March 2013 (UTC)
I've copyedited the ratings paragraph. Miyagawa (talk) 21:12, 10 March 2013 (UTC)
That's definitely better. Chris857 (talk) 19:42, 11 March 2013 (UTC)
This nomination seems to have been sitting for a few days with no movement, so hopefully no one will mind if I step in to finish reviewing? Chris857 has indicated article checks above and I have also looked at the reception section queried, which seems fine.
  • Hook is 183 characters and supported by online ref #1 in final sentence of 'Casting' section; correctly formatted; and sufficiently interesting (even to a non Trekkie aficionado like me!).

Symbol confirmed.svg Looks fine. SagaciousPhil - Chat 13:13, 15 March 2013 (UTC)