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French submarine Armide

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Armide, date unknown

Armide, date unknown

• ... that when the sale of the French-built No14 (pictured) was cancelled by France during World War I, the Japanese Navy built another No14 by itself? Source: http://www.navypedia.org/ships/japan/jap_ss_schneider_laubeuf.htm
  • ALT1:... that when the submarine No14 (pictured), ordered by Japan, was seized by France before its sale, the Japanese Navy built its own No14 by itself? Source: http://www.navypedia.org/ships/japan/jap_ss_schneider_laubeuf.htm
  • ALT2:... that when the Japanese submarine No14 (pictured) was seized by France and commissioned into its navy as Armide, the Japanese Navy built its own No14 by itself? Source: http://www.navypedia.org/ships/japan/jap_ss_schneider_laubeuf.htm
  • ALT3:... that after the French-built Japanese submarine No14 (pictured) had been seized by France and commissioned into its navy as Armide, the Japanese built their own No14 to the same design?

• Reviewed: Woodvale Park
• Comment: feel free to remove "by itself" if you think it does not fit in well.

Created by L293D (talk). Self-nominated at 14:37, 12 November 2018 (UTC).

• 16px Template:Ping This article is new enough and long enough, and I have added user Lyndaship to the credits. The image is in the public domain, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. I can't see the hook fact, about the Japanese replacing the requisitioned vessel, in the article so I think we need a different hook. A QPQ has been done. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:28, 23 November 2018 (UTC)

• Template:Ping Fixed, I've added the hook fact to the article. L293D (☎ • ✎) 12:58, 23 November 2018 (UTC)

• Template:Ping Thank you. I have added a citation for the fact. What do you think of ALT3? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:52, 23 November 2018 (UTC)

ALT3 is really nice, I've struck my other hooks. L293D (☎ • ✎) 14:31, 23 November 2018 (UTC)

• 16px Although I suggested ALT3, it is really just a rehash of the other hooks so I'll give it a tick. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 18:17, 23 November 2018 (UTC)