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Gregorio Jiménez de la Cruz
- ... that Gregorio Jiménez de la CruzTemplate:`s murder has caused several organizations to demand journalist protection in Mexico?
- ALT1:... that while officials in the Mexican state Veracruz believe Gregorio Jiménez de la Cruz was murdered over a personal dispute, his fellow reporters suspect it was for his investigative work?
Created by DaltonCastle (talk). Self nominated at 02:17, 12 November 2014 (UTC).
Length verified. History is a little inaccurate—it is nominated under November 11, but history shows it was created November 7 and I cannot find any record of a move to mainspace in the logs. Whatever; at this point it's not important. I much prefer ALT1 and have reworded to be less awkward. Reference given (note 6) only says that activists have called for the state governor to resign without explaining why (footnote 5, or another note that clarifies this better. Daniel Case (talk) 21:46, 23 December 2014 (UTC)
- The article uses way too many quotes and should have more paraphrasing. Stating "according to [x newspaper]" is also unnecessary; readers can check the source for that. I also recommend breaking up the Murder section because it's way too big. ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 05:39, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
It has been over a week since this comment was made; neither the nominator nor anyone else has done any work on the article for ten days before that. I think that's more than long enough for us to wait, and I recommend the plug be considered pulled on this one. Daniel Case (talk) 19:49, 1 January 2015 (UTC)
- The article uses way too many quotes and should have more paraphrasing. Stating "according to [x newspaper]" is also unnecessary; readers can check the source for that. I also recommend breaking up the Murder section because it's way too big. ComputerJA (☎ • ✎) 05:39, 24 December 2014 (UTC)
- Daniel Case, the nominator made a series of edits to the article about 30 hours after you posted the above. Given that it was the holidays, perhaps a few extra days to respond are allowable. Have your issues, and those mentioned by ComputerJA, been satisfactorily addressed? BlueMoonset (talk) 01:38, 5 January 2015 (UTC)
