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He Luli
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that when He Luli was 14, her home was bombed and her 12-year-old sister was killed?Source: RCCK, Lary 2015
- Reviewed: North China Craton
Created by Zanhe (talk). Self-nominated at 06:24, 26 November 2017 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced though some refs are in Chinese, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ not done. Template:Ping Do so an a tick will be given. Nice hook.CrossTemple Jay 14:07, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Re thanks for your review. I've added a QPQ. -Zanhe (talk) 02:25, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
All in order. Ready.CrossTemple Jay 11:23, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that when He Luli was fourteen, an assassin's bombs killed her younger sister?
- Template:Re Sorry to bother you again. After re-reading the hook, I feel it sounds too matter-of-fact for such a tragedy. So I'm proposing ALT1 instead, which conveys essentially the same information but sounds more sympathetic. Would you mind re-reviewing it? Thanks! -Zanhe (talk) 20:19, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
Nice tweet on the hook. I give it a tick. Yo. CrossTemple Jay 21:46, 30 November 2017 (UTC)