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Holy Trinity Church, Ryde
- ... that the Cracked Bell of Trinity Church died of a broken heart and wrote to a newspaper about it? Source: Offline sources Wheeler (1968) p23 and Lane (1994) p32 both quote the full letter as part of their telling of the story; full text available on request.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/ATP (British Rail) (review nearly complete at this timestamp; will be completed in a few hours Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 13:53, 11 March 2020 (UTC))
- Comment: Possibly for 1st April...? Expanded from a 1000-byte stub as part of The Great Britain and Ireland Destubathon March contest. Probably works best without an image, but this could be used.
5x expanded by Hassocks5489 (talk). Self-nominated at 13:52, 10 March 2020 (UTC).
Length ok, sufficiently expanded (nice work!) and nominated in time. QPQ done.
- Hook is concise, amusing and would indeed be suitable for 1 April. It is cited inline to reliable offline sources.
- Article is well developed and cited inline to reliable sources, generally offline/paywalled, so I'm AGFing. I only have minor queries -- I assume the short quotations in the lead come from Ref 5? I tend to try to put the citation right next to the quotation. Were you able to check refs 1,3? I don't have access to those. Is there any ISBN for Lane (1994)? I thought by that date most books had one.
- Under Organ, the in-text url needs to be converted to a source or an external link.
- Both images in the article are suitably licensed if an image is desired but I agree the hook might work best without an image of the church.
- Earwig found nothing, and spot checks found no close paraphrasing issues though I wasn't able to access most of the sources.
- Espresso Addict (talk) 06:25, 15 March 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Ping Thanks for your review. I have fixed the National Pipe Organ Register URL. Lane (1994) doesn't have an ISBN, perhaps because it was published locally on a small scale by the (former) South Wight Borough Council. I have a free British Newspaper Archive subscription and have checked refs [1] and [3]; information correlates with that quoted elsewhere. Cheers, Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 17:33, 15 March 2020 (UTC)
Thanks. Espresso Addict (talk) 04:09, 16 March 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Ping Thanks for your review. I have fixed the National Pipe Organ Register URL. Lane (1994) doesn't have an ISBN, perhaps because it was published locally on a small scale by the (former) South Wight Borough Council. I have a free British Newspaper Archive subscription and have checked refs [1] and [3]; information correlates with that quoted elsewhere. Cheers, Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 17:33, 15 March 2020 (UTC)