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Indian Cave Creek
- ... that Indian Cave Creek flows over a 40-foot (12-meter) waterfall to reach White Oak Run?
Moved to mainspace by Jakec (talk). Self-nominated at 01:39, 26 May 2015 (UTC).
- There are some concerns I have with the hook. "That Indian Cave Creek flows over a 40-foot (12-meter) waterfall" is present in the "Geography and geology" section, but the second part is not. Instead, that information is inferred in other parts of the article. I would suggest striking out the second part. The second problem is the inline citation given for the hook does not mention that Forty Foot Falls is forty feet high. If I am mistaken can you reply with the page number from the citation? In light of these issues, I would recommend the ALT1 hook below:
- ALT1 ... that Indian Cave Creek flows over Forty Foot Falls in Archbald, Pennsylvania?
- Let me know if you need any help or would like me to followup with this nomination. Z1720 (talk) 03:10, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
- Template:Ping You are mistaken on both counts. The inline citation does in fact say that the falls are 40 feet high. It also says that the falls are at its mouth, which is White Oak Run. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 11:41, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
- Let me know if you need any help or would like me to followup with this nomination. Z1720 (talk) 03:10, 31 May 2015 (UTC)