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Jan van Beers (artist)

1891 Vanity Fair caricature

  • ... that Jan van Beers was largely unknown until the scandal of being accused of painting over a photograph brought him worldwide fame?
  • ALT1... that Jan van Beers was largely unknown until in 1881, three critics mistook his miniature hyperrealist style for painting over a photograph, and the resulting attention brought him worldwide fame?

Created by Edwardx (talk), Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 00:55, 13 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Mostly good. Two bits that could use explicit citations (I've marked them) and then I think it's good to go. Phrasing of hook could possibly be improved, but is accurate and sourced. Once the[citation needed] tags are fixed, and, ideally, "scandal of being accused" be rewritten, it's good to go. Adam Cuerden (talk) 22:46, 13 March 2014 (UTC)
  • Citations have been added, and I've added an ALT1 attempt at a revised hook. Edwardx (talk) 10:07, 14 March 2014 (UTC)