Template:Did you know nominations/Jimmy Greene
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Jimmy Greene
- ... that Jimmy Greene (pictured), a jazz saxophonist, whose six year-old daughter was killed in the Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting, is nominated for a Grammy Award in the Best Jazz Instrumental Album category?
Created by The Cross Bearer (talk). Self-nominated at 04:37, 6 January 2016 (UTC).
- Not a review I find the hook as stated quite odd. Can I suggest that we do not mention his daughters death? Victuallers (talk) 16:40, 6 January 2016 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Jimmy Greene (pictured), a jazz saxophonist has been nominated for a Grammy Award for the Best Jazz Instrumental Album?
- ..or
- ALT2: ... that the album that Jimmy Greene (pictured) wrote in tribute to his murdered daughter has been nominated for a Grammy Award?
- I like your second hook the best, where many of the sources and reviews specifically cite the daughter death with regards to this album and its contents. I would change "wrote" to "created was".The Cross Bearer (talk) 04:38, 7 January 2016 (UTC)
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