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Revision as of 16:26, 3 October 2015 by imported>BlueMoonset (striking both hooks due to issues of accuracy)
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Julie Schwabe
... that philanthropist Julie Schwabe asked Dickens to help when her ex-governess's conviction was reduced from murder to cruelty?
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... that Manchester philanthropist Julie Schwabe died in a school she had founded in Italy? - Reviewed: QPQ = Bridget van Kralingen
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Created by Victuallers (talk). Self-nominated at 12:02, 11 September 2015 (UTC).
new enough, long enough, inline citations and closed paragraphs checks. factual and interesting reading. BabbaQ (talk) 15:56, 1 October 2015 (UTC)
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Striking both hooks. The original hook implies that Dickens was asked after the conviction was changed to a lesser offense, which is not supported by the article. (It seems more likely that his intervention was requested after the initial conviction and in aid of the appeal that eventually succeeding in reducing the offense, but again the article doesn't say.) And the article clearly states that she died "at the former Collegio Medico", but it's not at all clear that the school was still a going concern, which renders ALT1 problematic as well. Can we please have a new hook, or a reworked version of either or both of the above that is supported in the article? Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 16:25, 3 October 2015 (UTC)
