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Kandy Tuskers in 2020
... that the LPL team the Kandy Tuskers are owned by Bollywood actor Sohail Khan?Source: https://news.abplive.com/entertainment/movies/sohail-khan-becomes-proud-owner-of-kandy-tuskers-franchise-in-lanka-premier-league-2020-1370130- ALT1:
... that the Kandy Tuskers came last in the inaugural LPL?Source: https://www.espncricinfo.com/series/lanka-premier-league-2020-21-1237339/points-table-standings- ALT2:
... that the Sri Lankan Lanka Premier League cricket team the Kandy Tuskers are owned by Bollywood actor Sohail Khan?Source: https://news.abplive.com/entertainment/movies/sohail-khan-becomes-proud-owner-of-kandy-tuskers-franchise-in-lanka-premier-league-2020-1370130- ALT3:... that in 2020, the Sri Lankan Lanka Premier League (LPL) cricket team the Kandy Tuskers won 2 out of 8 matches in the inugral LPL meaning they finished last? Source: https://www.espncricinfo.com/series/lanka-premier-league-2020-21-1237339/points-table-standings
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Created by Fade258 (talk). Nominated by CreativeNorth (talk) at 12:45, 12 December 2020 (UTC).
The source reflects the hook, and the article appears appropriate, but the hook doesn't make sense to an average reader. Suggest something like: that the Sri Lankan Lanka Premier League cricket team the Kandy Tuskers is owned by Bollywood actor Sohail Khan? Sadads (talk) 13:41, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Reply to I've took your advice with ALT2, does it look any better. Thanks. CreativeNorth (talk) 18:49, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
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Sorry, but none of the hooks are accurate because they make you think you're clicking on Kandy Tuskers, not an article about their 2020 season. Please write a different hook that clues the reader to the topic. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 19:57, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Reply to Is ALT3 alright? Thanks. CreativeNorth (talk) 21:54, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
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