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Kongsi federation
- ... that kongsi federations such as the Lanfang Republic once controlled a large part of western Borneo?
Created/expanded by Khanate General (talk). Self-nominated at 01:42, 1 May 2015 (UTC).
The references seem fine (AGF for being printed sources, no Google Book links). Only one paragraph was lacking a reference (cite req added). Minor language c/e is needed (kongsi is too often spelled without a capital letter). Hook is neutral and referenced. The article structure needs improvement (lead is too long, body too short) but this is not a DYK MoS issue. However, the empty section "Rise of kongsi federations" needs to be (preferably) expanded or deleted. As the author has nominated a number of DYKs before, a review of another nom is required. Please ping me when those issues are addressed. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 09:31, 3 June 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review! I apologize for the delay. I'll fix the article within the next few days.--Khanate General ☪ talk project mongol conquests 00:15, 21 June 2015 (UTC)
- QPQ done. Working on the article. The word kongsi isn't capitalized because my sources don't capitalize it, and it's technically not a proper noun.--Khanate General ☪ talk project mongol conquests 07:07, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
- There are a couple of citation needed tags that need taking care of and then this will be ready. (now some cheerleading: Come on!; let's go!; let's get this nom done! K-O-N-G-S-I; yeeeeeah, kongsi!) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Belle (talk • contribs) 09:09, 25 June 2015 (UTC)
- Everything is cited now.--Khanate General ☪ talk project mongol conquests 08:54, 30 June 2015 (UTC)
- There are a couple of citation needed tags that need taking care of and then this will be ready. (now some cheerleading: Come on!; let's go!; let's get this nom done! K-O-N-G-S-I; yeeeeeah, kongsi!) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Belle (talk • contribs) 09:09, 25 June 2015 (UTC)