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Lautten Compagney
... that the Lautten Compagney played Monteverdi's Vespers as the Rheingau Musik Festival's annual Marienvesper at Eberbach Abbey, sung by "amarcord & guests"?
- Reviewed: Tazumal
Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nominated at 12:41, 18 August 2013 (UTC).
- 16px Article is new and long enough. Hook is short and interesting enough. Source materials are in German language, but assumption of good faith is in order. Based on spot-checking (and running the copyvio checker), article appears to be compliant with core policies. Cbl62 (talk) 00:25, 20 August 2013 (UTC)
- 16px Putting the quotes around "amarcord & guests" in the hook, when such a construction does not appear in the article, is problematic. I also think Eberbach Abbey is an unnecessary detail that distracts from the main hook facts. I suggest the following ALT:
- ALT1: ... that the Lautten Compagney played Monteverdi's Vespers for the Rheingau Musik Festival's annual Marienvesper, which was sung by ensemble amarcord and other guests? —BlueMoonset (talk) 17:00, 21 August 2013 (UTC)
- fine with me. "amarcord & guests" was the term in the program and source, and shorter, but never mind. Eberbach is for the general reader perhaps the one thing he would know as the place where interior scenes of "The Name of the Rose (film)" were filmed, but same. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:32, 21 August 2013 (UTC)