Template:Did you know nominations/Lee Eun-soo

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Lee Eun-soo

  • Reviewed: to follow

Created by Dumelow (talk). Self-nominated at 21:58, 29 September 2019 (UTC).

  • Article is new enough (created September 28) and long enough (prose is 2347 characters).
  • Article is written in NPOV and contains sufficient inline citations.
  • Earwig detects no copyvio problems.
  • Hook is short enough, meets formatting guidelines, and is supported by an inline citation.
  • While accurate and adequately sourced, the hook doesn't strike me as terribly riveting to a broad audience, though I understand it may be tough to come up with something more "hooky" on a subject like this. Do you have any ALT suggestions?

Symbol question.svg Article is almost good to go. Waiting on an answer to my question about a possible ALT, and QPQ needs to be done. Interesting and well written article overall! Armadillopteryxtalk 06:36, 30 September 2019 (UTC)

Hi Armadillopteryx thanks for your review, I'll get a QPQ sorted as soon as possible. I think the fact i found was the hookiest i could make, but I've put forward a few alternatives below. I appreciate these may not be all that hooky. I am happy to wothdraw this nomination if, in your opinion, they don't meet the threshold - Dumelow (talk) 08:32, 30 September 2019 (UTC)
  • ALT1: ... that Lee Eun-soo, South Korea's seventh female general, was head of the army's Human Rights Department?
  • ALT2: ... that Lee Eun-soo was South Korea's seventh female general officer and the first in the legal branch?
I think this is a tough subject to write a hook for, but the article is well done and certainly qualifies for DYK. I'm partial to the last hook you suggested; it's concise and presents two interesting facts that are more broad than in the other hooks, which could lose some of their impact on anyone who doesn't know at least a little about the judicial branch of the military.
Symbol question.svg Good to go with ALT2 (as soon as QPQ is done)! Armadillopteryxtalk 19:19, 30 September 2019 (UTC)
Hi Armadillopteryx, QPQ review now carried out at Template:Did you know nominations/Nutfield Priory - Dumelow (talk) 17:32, 1 October 2019 (UTC)
Okay!
Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go with ALT2. Armadillopteryxtalk 17:35, 1 October 2019 (UTC)