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Librotraficante
- ... that Librotraficante smuggled books into Arizona?
- Reviewed: Chamber pop
Created by Nikkimaria (talk). Self-nominated at 15:08, 24 February 2019 (UTC).
Could a better hook be proposed here? It has potential but the wording seems too abrupt, and smuggling by itself is not really interesting for DYK standards if there's no context. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:22, 1 March 2019 (UTC)
- that Librotraficante led a caravan from Houston to smuggle books into underground libraries in Arizona? Nikkimaria (talk) 12:51, 1 March 2019 (UTC)
- That doesn't sound very clear to a typical reader, to be honest. If you want, I could suggest a rephrased hook here. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 13:09, 3 March 2019 (UTC)
- Sure. Nikkimaria (talk) 13:55, 3 March 2019 (UTC)
- I'm having difficulty right now thinking of an exact wording, but one suggestion I could give would be to focus on how it was formed as a result of that Arizona decision. Or you could build up from the smuggling thing, but also mention how the movement also created "underground libraries". Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 00:39, 4 March 2019 (UTC)
- Sure. Nikkimaria (talk) 13:55, 3 March 2019 (UTC)