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Marika Kouno
- ... that Marika Kouno was inspired to pursue a career in voice acting by Ikue Ōtani, the voice actress of Pikachu? Source: [1] "『ポケットモンスター』のピカチュウと『ワンピース』のチョッパーの声が同じ人(大谷さん)だと知ったとき、声優さんすごいなぁ~と思い、意識し始めました。私も子どもながらに漠然と「この人になりたい!」って思いましたね。 "
- ALT1:
... that Ikue Ōtani's vocal performances as Chopper from One Piece and as Pikachu helped inspire Marika Kouno to pursue a career in voice acting? Source: same as ALT0 - ALT2:
... that Ikue Ōtani's vocal performances as Pikachu helped inspire Marika Kouno to pursue a career in voice acting?
- ALT1:
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Class of 2018
- Comment: Requesting that this goes up on Kouno's birthday on February 22.
5x expanded by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:13, 15 January 2019 (UTC).
Solid facts on good sources, Japanese sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. The article is safely long enough, so I suggest a bit of trimming, - no prerequisite for a pass, just suggestions:
- "she was fond of reading, and she liked to read aloud", besides that the info is not tremendously interesting - you may loose your readers - it's repetitious.
- "She first became interested" - and second?
- Do we have a year for the "aspiring"?
- I'd drop all these "would", - she did it, or not?
- "She also participated in other activities such as playing basketball." - "She also played basketball."??
- "After her graduation, she enrolled in a training school to hone her skills." - what else do you enter a training school for than to hone your skills?
- No need to repeat training school the next sentence.
- I'd like links for "music unit" and "idoö unit" - no idea what that means, unfamiliar with the topic, - or is it written only for those who know?
- Same in the hook: can you avoid the repetition of "voice actress"? For example "who voiced Pikachu"? I prefer the original hook structure, where the topic is upfront. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:45, 17 January 2019 (UTC)