Template:Did you know nominations/Marriage of Empress Theophanu

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Marriage of Empress Theophanu

Created by Thine Antique Pen (talk). Self nominated at 17:01, 23 November 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Nice article, long enough, new enough and very well sourced. However, I think it may be mistitled - it should surely be the marriage charter of Theophanu (I see many references to the document as a marriage charter [1]). I'd therefore suggest a slightly more accessible hook, as follows, with a retitled article:
I think this would be clearer to the non-specialist who wouldn't be familiar with the term consortium imperii (which I'd think most people wouldn't have heard of). Prioryman (talk) 21:46, 24 November 2014 (UTC)
  • I've moved the article and would be fine with that hook. Thine Antique Pen (talk) 22:00, 24 November 2014 (UTC)
  • OK, that's great. We're good to go with ALT1. Prioryman (talk) 22:17, 24 November 2014 (UTC)
  • Apologies, had forgotten about that! Prioryman (talk) 14:38, 25 November 2014 (UTC)