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Mary Puckey
- ... that under the leadership of Mary Puckey, Sydney's Rachel Forster Hospital expanded from 12 to 120 beds? Source: [1]
- ALT1: ... that Mary Puckey was the first female superintendent of an Australian hospital?
- Reviewed: Zafirlukast
Created by 97198 (talk). Self-nominated at 11:53, 18 December 2017 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Hook may need some tweaking. I found this she was the first woman to serve as superintendent of an Australian hospital interesting and think it would be nice to incorporate it in. CrossTemple Jay 15:52, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping There have been a lot of "first woman" hooks recently which are a bit repetitive, so I thought the proposed hook was an interesting possibility. But I've added your suggestion as an alternative hook, and perhaps the promoter can choose between them. 97198 (talk) 09:44, 19 December 2017 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that Mary Puckey served as general superintendent of Sydney's Rachel Forster Hospital for 22 years and was award an MBE after her retirement? Source: [2]
- Template:Ping I have suggested a new hook. A new reviewer will be needed. CrossTemple Jay 11:15, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
New reviewer requested to look at any of the proposed hooks. 97198 (talk) 11:29, 20 December 2017 (UTC)
Approving all three hooks, which check out with inline citations. Preference to ALT0 (an actual accomplishment, rather than job titles/awards), but up to the promoter to decide. --Usernameunique (talk) 09:00, 22 December 2017 (UTC)