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Matsumoto Masanobu
- ... that Matsumoto Masanobu created the Kashima Shin-ryū style of swordfighting after being visited in a dream by the god Takemikazuchi?
- ALT1:... that Matsumoto Masanobu killed more than one hundred men during his military career?
- Reviewed: Robert McLachlan (cinematographer)
Created by Yunshui (talk). Self-nominated at 14:25, 8 September 2015 (UTC).
Article was old enough when nominated and is still new enough. Inline citations are used thorough, many of them are only partially accessible. Others appear to fit their conclusions (save for one name which I've corrected). No copyright violations or plagiarism detected. Both hooks are concise enough, but the first one is a mite misleading: It's one legend out of two mentioned ones that states that possibility. Prefer the ALT hook thus, also it seems more interesting to me. QPQ is done. My only question is, is the declarative tone of the hooks appropriate? This topic seems to be at the limit between history and legend and if memory serves, the historical record from ancient Japanese times is often fairly ambiguous in this regard.Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 18:44, 25 September 2015 (UTC)