Template:Did you know nominations/Mohamed Hadid

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Mohamed Hadid

Created by Edwardx (talk), Zigzig20s (talk), Tenebrae (talk), and Dundun1984 (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 20:33, 27 December 2015 (UTC).

  • Review Symbol question.svg New article, timely nominated. Meets core policies and guidelines, and in particular: is neutral; cites sources with inline citations; is free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism. DYK nomination was timely and article is easily long enough. Every paragraph is cited. Earwig's copy violation detector: Mohamed Hadid report gives it a clean bill. Hook is hooky enough, I think, and relates directly to the essence of the article. It is interesting, decently neutral, and appropriately cited. I might rephrase the hook as "... that devout Muslim Mohamed Hadid, a life long tea totaller, owns a 5,000-bottle wine cellar and a Beverly Hills winery?" Which is really just a rewrite of the present hook. Either phrasing of the hooks is supported by the following: Farameh, Patrice (1 July 2008). "Hadid's Modern Masterpiece: Mohamed Hadid". Haute Living. Retrieved 20 December 2015. Even though he has never indulged in alcohol in his life, his 5,000-bottle wine cellar is filled with the best French and Californian wines. Not only does his collection consist of a diverse range of premium wines from local vineyards such as Summerland Winery, but it also includes bottles from his very own winery in Beverly Hills. QPQ not yet done. 7&6=thirteen () 22:32, 30 December 2015 (UTC)
  • Thank you 7&6=thirteen. I've done the QPQ, and added an ALT1, as you have suggested. Edwardx (talk) 13:12, 31 December 2015 (UTC)
  • Review Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go! I prefer ALT1. 7&6=thirteen () 13:23, 31 December 2015 (UTC)