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Obelisk Commemorating Roger Barnston
- ... that the four lions surrounding the Obelisk Commemorating Roger Barnston (pictured) have been described as either mourning or snoozing?
- Reviewed: Kielce Bus Station
Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nominated at 19:27, 8 January 2014 (UTC).
Date checks out, length OK, image OK. I have several points to make. (1) Redirect link to "listed building" in header needs correcting, but that is not important. I am confused about the references for the hook. (2) Reference 1 is placed next to the word "mourning" in the text, but the word does not occur in that citation. (3) It may be that both "mourning" and "snoozing" are quoted in reference 4, but that is not online for checking. To clarify things, please could you (a) move reference 1 to the end of the same sentence. Also, please could you (b) confirm here that both words, "mourning" and "snoozing," are quoted in reference 4, so that we can take it IGF. Thank you for your patience in this - it's a worthwhile article about a rather beautiful monument, so it's worth getting it right.Storye book (talk) 20:01, 8 January 2014 (UTC)