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Paradise Circus, Birmingham
- ... that Paradise (pictured) is due to be demolished?
Created by Bs0u10e01 (talk). Nominated by Pigsonthewing (talk) at 21:13, 9 December 2014 (UTC).
- Comment: Review pending. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 16:34, 15 December 2014 (UTC)
- Comment: If the image is used, (pictured) needs to be added to the hook, but I think it may be better quirky without. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:48, 15 December 2014 (UTC)
- Comment: Great hook. Article is way short on in line references. Also has only one real reference, so it is thin in that regard. QPQ Not a self nomination, so none needed. Long enough. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 16:56, 15 December 2014 (UTC)
- Comment: There are still three paragraphs that are uncited. That needs to be fixed before I can do a full review. Hypothetically, if I approved the DYK, it would just bounce. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 12:11, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
- Comment: One option is to comment out these paragraphs until after DYK. The article is long enough without them. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:02, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
- Perhaps User:Bs0u10e01 can assist? Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 15:18, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
- Another preliminary Comment: Earwig's copy violation tool indicates
some too close paraphrasing from the first two websites. We need to paraphrase and thesaurize more aggressively.I want a clean bill of health. It now indicates that we are clean. No suspected copyright violations. I cleaned them up myself. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 00:55, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
- Review
- Good to Go! Meets all DYK requirements. New article, long enough, timely nominated, QPQ N/A. Not a self nomination. However, I think that User: Pigsonthewing made a substantial contribution and should be listed as a cocreator. I have taken the liberty of adding him to DYKmake. To that end, I am donating a spare QPQ: Template:Did you know nominations/The Manchester Rambler. The article meets core policies and guidelines. Every paragraph is now cited.
- Hook referenceS verified and cited.
- No copyright violations or too close paraphrasing. Earwig's copy violation detector says we are now clean.
- The hook is very hooky. One of the best hooks we've had in a while. It relates directly to the essence of the article. It is interesting, decently neutral, and cited. Nicely done! A meticulous article on an important civil subject. I am not taking a position on the use of the picture, other than to say it is a free image, is used in the article and could be used. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 01:12, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
- There are some editors out there (who shall remain nameless) who think they might want a sexier hook. I leave it to them to chime in. 7&6=thirteen (☎) 03:04, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
- ALT1 ... that Paradise will be demolished to make way for a "vibrant mixed use development"?
EEng (talk) 16:08, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
- Review
- ALT 1 is also supported by the sources. Good to Go! 7&6=thirteen (☎) 16:11, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
- PoV. Prefer the original. Andy Mabbett (Pigsonthewing); Talk to Andy; Andy's edits 16:15, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
